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Shell Shock

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He hides in his shell the teacher did tell,
Family shrugged-maturity crosses wisdom,
Smile scarred onto his lips, a turtle locked in death grips,
A tortoise on its back, shell buried in wet sand,
A trapped, caged, screaming band,
shell shock from hell

Tank not cocoon-weaponized not marooned,
Ammo vanished before nuptial battles,
What was a clash turned to slaughter,
As the chrysalis burned in fire

Heads above and down between; two,
Strikes to vulnerable twins brought the end to,
As quick as surely penetrating, shell rot spreading through

Mind above and only one there too,
Flip the animal onto a back tattooed with words,
Awestruck aren't you?
Desperate words unable to hold back the laughter crew

Turtle, tortoise, tank crawling through closed down
shells, cocoons, chrysalides cracking,
Sure words-they are meant to open,
Flower, butterfly, freedom,
Opened at the cost of a kingdom with castle moats of scar tissue,
But as the family said earlier:
no issue
Also known as simply "Nostalgia" or "Memories" when I read other drafts before. I do try to make better than just boring one word titles.

This one is not nearly as cryptic as my recent The Quest Giver, but I love having discussions in the comments about what people interpret from reading. So I'll gladly respond to any and all comments :)

-Phnks
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Interesting...As long as the shell holds, its stable and OK. When it breaks, its horrible. What is after that...who knows?